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Winter mid-night
dream discovers in heart
loneliness



Nice one!!! Regards


Mahvash Afzal, Aligarh
Jan 07, 2013


Ah! Winter yearning for comforting company superbly articulated!


Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India
Jan 06, 2013

Saadat Tahir

Comment: beautiful...
great compression.....enjoyed
nice content and context

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